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[REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D

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1 [REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D on Tue Oct 04, 2011 6:40 pm

http://www.sendspace.com/file/bnkpxh
Finaly After all the frustration blood sweat zombiekilling time I HAVE THROWN TOGETHER
NAZI GARDEN its my first but i want to post it in the maps non apply if i dont get apped but
Hope you enjoy :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bball: VeryHappy Tongue

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2 Re: [REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D on Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:04 pm

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Well here is my go at this map analysis.


Things I liked Smilez

-mp40 and thompson models placed correctly

-liked the textures in the first room

-windows done very well

-path corners done very well

-all gun id's are correct



Things I Disliked Frown

-perks not against walls

-pap not on the ground, its floating

-thompson ammo is 220 instead of whats its supposed to be, 200

-price of mg42 and browning were way to low

-mg42 and browning models placed way to high

-gap in the ceiling of the pap room

-gap to the right of the quick revieve

-one of your stairs textures doesn't match the others

-raygun costs no money whatsoever even though it says it does



Ways to improve:

-fix your textures up a bit, however thats my opinion

-fix the gaps

-add a roof

-add another room or two

-add some more windows

-fix your prices, very random

-fix thompson ammo

-fix perk/pap machine placing


I really don't like truthfully saying that any map is bad and I wont in this case either. This map is nice, it has a nice concept and I can tell you put alot of effort into it. At this point in time the map is broken from a few mistakes that can be easily fixed. And also try adding a bit more creativity as well. In the end I dont decide if you are accepted but the best of luck and I hope you continue mapping, and as always I'm here to help Smilez

3 Re: [REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D on Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:26 pm

mofu23


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okay when i download i will test it and i will see how good your map is :cheers:

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4 Re: [REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D on Tue Oct 04, 2011 7:43 pm

well my first map ill make another map soon
or maybe update tomb

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5 Re: [REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D on Thu Oct 06, 2011 7:07 am

ArKaZeen


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keep up the good work

Your perks are not on the wall btw

good try tho

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6 Re: [REJECTED/LOCKED]Nazi Garden Is Done :D on Fri Oct 07, 2011 1:11 pm

true nightmare


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its o.k for a start but its a no im sorry, try using thinner walls and making sure its clean as in no gaps and add a few rooms

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