i have found the error: DO NOT PUT . IN THE NAME OR THE MAP DOESNT WORK
anyway...
overall (3/10): (beginngers tier)
Weapons (0/10): you have pack-a-punched weapons on the wall that would be fine if they actully worked, not a single weapon on the wall gives you a weapon (check your weapon ids) the wunderwaffle model is too high up to reach
perks, pack-a-punch and random box (4/10): its good you know the perk entitles but you dont know when to use them, the pack-a-punch is in the concerner and its not worth it, phd flopper has no use on this map as there is no where to flop, the random box could be up to the wall
windows and zombies (0/10): the zombies walk on... well nothing you could at least put a block there and the window amount is lacking, also the windows being next to each other is shit, make it harder for the player
rooms and doors (0/10): i couldn't find a single door you know why? because there is none, more rooms make a better map,
if you ix most of these error there is a chance you maybe a mapper but for now thats a BIG NO, also if there was dogs i was bored before they got there