[REJECTED/LOCKED] my house application

hello i am applying

here is my second map it is called my house enjoy

http://www.sendspace.com/file/7yfnnd

UPDATE
http://www.sendspace.com/file/g1ihef
added waypoints

EDIT BY true nightmare:

soul this map is in the dropbox

i like the layout its worth the map, but a map this big really needs waypoints

the perks machine are ok, but pack-a-punch is in the wall and its in a huge room

the textures get bored after 2 seconds, try using more textures, i note that some windows dont work which is a shame, i think ju[s]tice has the same problem as dw about it

i would say yes but again im gonna leave it to soul

ok cheers
by the way im not that sure about waypoints because they never work for me :/

randomz1123 wrote:hello i am applying

here is my second map it is called my house enjoy

http://www.sendspace.com/file/7yfnnd

ima try it too

If You Go To Map Then Map Proprieties And Default Light Level Put 200 In There And It Will Make It Darker. ( The Lower The Number The Darker It Will Be )

randomz1123 wrote:ok cheers
by the way im not that sure about waypoints because they never work for me :/

put waypoints and a seperate room for the pap and it will be awesome,
I enjoyed playing it

thebitchwiththerpg aka randomz1123 lol wrote:ok cheers
by the way im not that sure about waypoints because they never work for me :/

for waypoints watch video 11 of my tutorials here https://nzportable.forumotion.com/t57-how-to-make-an-nzp-map-video-tutorials

UPDATE!

dang ur 99

oh yeah :lol!:

alright, first there is a glitch to get out the map when you get outside,

the waypoints suck lol everyone gets me to do them lol

and its best to do the cheapist door first, eg. 750 then a 1000 and then a 1250

other then that your a good mapper, but i will still let soul decide

I'm rejecting this. In it's current state this map isn't enough for me BUT if you polish it up a little bit, eg fix lighting, make it so you can't see into mapping oblivion (close your map up), i think i saw a random cube hangin outside the wall. Some other things. True was right with the door/barricades theyre a little sporadic in price. The textures sometimes look akward like when you look at the platform you come from to get outside. The box on the stairs would look allot less weird if it was tilted. Also play with some models that come with NZP to add some pizazz to your map. I don't judge waypoints to harsh....true can do those But yeah spice this map up a bit and reapply with the new map and ill definitely add ya